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January 2013

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tepid reception

Ze arrrrt of ze plai vus overlukd.
Ok, it was a first draft.  I knew it needed work.  But seriously, you didn't follow the action??  You're entire 24 person experience chart led you to ask what was happening and how were the two areas connected??  I..just...*shakes head*  I would have felt better about it if people had been offended.  But they just didn't get it.  Not that they didn't get the meanings and social commentary, they didn't get the pieces.  They couldn't follow the red rope from point A to point B.  *sigh*  Luckily, I know someone else with a theatre degree who offered feedback with articulate points and valuable analysis so I can actually do some revision.  The next one will be all dialogue.  These morons can't follow stage directions.  Do I have to have a narrator say, "This is the old man referred to by the people on the other side of the stage."??  Read a book!

Ravensis has babai!!!

I has messy room. 

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Really?! Christ, even I followed the action and I don't know shit from shinola about theatre!